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    Default Hatsune Miku - Sakura Kimono

    Cosplayer's nickname: yurith
    character: Hatsune Miku
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    I'm still very new so comments and critiques would be very much appreciated ^^







    Last edited by yurith; Feb 20th, 13 at 02:20 AM.

  2. Thanks to yurith for this useful post!


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    Hi Yurith, good effort in this work of cosplay.
    There is a lot of room for improvement towards a better cosplay.

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    Very nice, specially if you're a newbie! Nice work on the hair and costume and it helps that the cosplayer is cute
    I don't really have any improvement suggestions, though.


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    Overall, you look really lovely, Yurith.
    For me, you need to work more on your make-up, overall. But to be honest you look nice in a whole body shot and not really in close-up. If you want to maintain that kind of make-up, best to not have a close-up shot.
    You can also modify your wig a little bit. It lacks "weight". Try to use some gel or something but not too much or just some hair oil or something. XD

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    Oh wow! It looks amazing! I think it is very good for a newbie. I think you may need to work on the tailoring. The outfit looks a bit too big for you, especially around the underarm area. I think you look very pretty. The bow tie accessories on your head can use a lift. I think your attention to detail is amazing.


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    hy yurith, what next theme you wearing ?


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    epic!!
    Perfect Miku!
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    i mean, it's not that bad. not at all.
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    Yurith San, that is very nice, i agree with others you have done very well indeed. If it is possible to make the "two tails" of her hair (your hair) more dramatic that is one of her signature elements but you are doing very well and above all..i hope you are having FUN! The Sakura Kimono was a nice outfit to choose.





    I love Miku so you have chosen one of my all time favorite characters to cosplay

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    Hi Yurith! I think you look just gorgeous! You're a cute cosplay girl, but I think you should work a little bit more on your eyes (make them even more dramatic). The rest of your costume is great, by the way. I specially liked the sakura kimono. Keep up the great work
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    More pictures please

    I am looking forward to seeing more of you photos.

    So far, so good.


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    that miku cosplay is amazing!!
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    Wow these cosplays are really good! They look very realistic, which is hard to achieve so well done! I also like the posing and the pictures are high quality which is great I hope to see more pictures soon?


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    Wow, that's really good work! I think pink hair would been more suited to the character though. Looks good!


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    Looks good. I would say if the character would smile a little, then the picture would be great. Nice job right there though! Thanks for sharing!


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