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    Smile ORIGINAL SHOUJO MANGA - PLEASE GIVE REVIEWS OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT MAYBE?

    Hi, I'm Aarell. I'm currently collaborating with my friend Midozaya in making a shoujo manga. I'm also working on my own shounen manga.
    This thread will be updates on it. Midozaya is the author while I'm the illustrator. Midozaya was inspired by anime like Sukitte Iinayo & Horimiya.
    As for the art, I do have my own style but I decided to go with the shoujo look incorporated with my personal style.

    Here is are the rough sketches of the main characters.


    -First Couple-
    Kenji X Sakuya

    -Second Couple-
    Yamada X Yukino

    -Third Couple-
    Rei X Riri

    If you can, please leave reviews or comments or suggestions. Maybe some improvements? If the designs are good?
    Maybe you have a favorite character? I dunno. But I hope you will enjoy the manga (title in the making, you can give suggestions too) XD Thank you.

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    not bad as of now lol

    thgh Yamada's specs.. is it designed to be curved?

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    yeah i was trying to go for that but i'm not really great at drawing specs

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    Good try for a work in progress!

    Just a personal opinion, both Kenji's and Yukino's faces are kind of too long.
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