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    My 2nd inking picture. Ignore the splotching ><;;; I'm kinda clumsy! The original drawing was better! ><;;;
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    i find that the head is like dropping off, there are no emotions in the eyes(or you wanted her to look that way?)
    The wrist of the hand is too ) ( already lol.. theree is a bone protuding out if u check on ur hand


    OH! and one last important thing that most people forget. if her head is tilt backwards.. her hair should be falling backwards as well unless its hairsprayed hair


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    I agree about the head placing thing but my sensei insisted that it should be tilting it ridiculously backwards...XD! I for got to add her hand bone joint whoops!

    Her hairs actually supposed to be that way bec when you lift yourself out of the water with ur neck bent forward ur hair goes down that way, followed by sharply flicking your head up would cause ur hair to float up as well, then by the movement u specified. I was going for the one inbetween. ^^

    Thank you very much 4 ur comment!


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    her head kind of bend too much to the back, it looks like droping off from her body


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    hey, actually the head can face the 'camera' like this but with the help of bringing the body much further back as well. now u're bending the body foward and the head back LOL

    but anyway proportion problems are least of my concern since they're commonly pointed out

    i like the effort and details you put for the inking. however. the blank areas become very jarring and it creates a focus. it is good if u wanna create a focus but if it's not ur intention then u might wanna take note.

    eg... if u wanna make the dragon the focus, i suggest u hatch or dot the upper half of the pic lightly as well so the dragon pops out even better

    hope it helps

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    oh yeah, the boobs should not be on the same level as the arms, its lower abit


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    Quote Originally Posted by zheng View Post
    her head kind of bend too much to the back, it looks like droping off from her body
    Haha XD! try to do better next time. ^^

    Quote Originally Posted by BNN View Post
    hey, actually the head can face the 'camera' like this but with the help of bringing the body much further back as well. now u're bending the body foward and the head back LOL

    but anyway proportion problems are least of my concern since they're commonly pointed out

    i like the effort and details you put for the inking. however. the blank areas become very jarring and it creates a focus. it is good if u wanna create a focus but if it's not ur intention then u might wanna take note.

    eg... if u wanna make the dragon the focus, i suggest u hatch or dot the upper half of the pic lightly as well so the dragon pops out even better

    hope it helps
    XD! Thank you very much for your comment! I think I'll try that!

    Quote Originally Posted by oreodunk View Post
    oh yeah, the boobs should not be on the same level as the arms, its lower abit
    Omg! I only noticed that whenyou said it!!! ><;;; I can't change it now! But I'll definetly remember for future pics!


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    I think it's a great attempt at inking~ it's great to see such effort >w<
    Just be patient with the hatching and stuff~ beware of all those 'tick's at the end of the inking

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    Quote Originally Posted by Flyingdagger View Post
    I think it's a great attempt at inking~ it's great to see such effort >w<
    Just be patient with the hatching and stuff~ beware of all those 'tick's at the end of the inking
    Thank you!!! You're very encouraging! I'll do my best to improve! XD!


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    Everyone has their own way of expressing their visuals, its just a matter of whether you can have it tastefully done and and make it easy on the eyes of the audience as well, especially on other artists.


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    And most importantly, you have to convince yourself whether you agree on the anatomy or stuffs and does the finished drawing look okay to you, even if you heed pple's advices, be it someone you look upon to or anybody.


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    Default First time using illustrator!

    I did this using a very old drawing to try out using illustrator... Her skins a little too pink tho... I dunno why because it wasn't that way when I was doing it! it only when i transferred it to the internet it became that colour! (Ignore the elbows length! ><;;; I know its a little too long and the gun looks fake...)
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    can reseize? It's a little too big...=)

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    Quote Originally Posted by moontique View Post
    can reseize? It's a little too big...=)
    I'll try! ><;;;


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    Nice~ Yup! Original loOks kinda beta~ But at least U try Inking, GoOd Job In Detailing!~ Emmmm~ Somehow I Feel That The Lady Body's Like Breaking into 2~ Lolx~

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