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    hey all. this is my first time posting up a drawing of mine. i did a drawing of kuchiki byakuya's bankai senbonzakura kageyoshi from bleach. do feel free to give constructive comments. btw, i used my handphone camera and its quite lousy, so sry abt tat. no flaming pls
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    Huh?! Bro, don't like this lah.... Two rows of blades, how to comment???

    Comment if the blades looked sharp or not?

    Maybe you can do us a favour by drawing something(a person preferably) in it. This is as constructive as I can get.

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    lolz. i told u i cant draw ppl. i can onli draw weapons or clothes haha


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    but then....how to comment on it?

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    i hav no idea lol


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    Quote Originally Posted by DarkJedi View Post
    lolz. i told u i cant draw ppl. i can onli draw weapons or clothes haha
    I thought it would be weapon or clothes design....

    I never expected this to happen. Haha!


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    to Dark : maybe u can design some sword shape or others style of weapons~


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    comment?

    i dunnoe...
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    lolz haha. ok see when i hav time then i draw some weapon designs


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    LOL! cg_dude, like this also can?


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    Quote Originally Posted by Rukawa-11 View Post
    LOL! cg_dude, like this also can?
    can.. we can comment on how much negative space he got...

    talk about vanishing points, the type of perspective ways to look at...

    adding blur towards the end of the VP for the blades.... anything man...

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    Pro jiu shi pro lah! Zai!


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    lol~

    eh, negative space = approximately 73.45%
    type of perspective = centered one-point perspective

    ooh, and the swords are very straight! I like the handwriting too! And there's 8 and a half swords at each side! Which adds up to 15 swords altogether! Awesome!!!111

    But haha, joking aside, which way are the swords facing? Inwards like the anime/manga, or towards the VP? From the blades itself, they seem to be pointing inwards, but the bottoms of the blades are leveled off towards the VP instead?

    But haha, that's as constructive as I can get, I suppose.
    (or maybe I'm just nitpicking : x)

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    Maybe you can add a dark shadowy figure at the other end of the walls of blades?

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    Ok, maybe I know what to add on. Judging from the perspective point of view, the swords should be getting smaller, not shorter. That is one thing you might wanna take note. =D

    Seriously, this is getting more page views than some of our completed works. =_=


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